05 Sep

Wrote this in a whim while browsing through a Facebook page where poets share their craft.


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Posted by on September 5, 2015 in Poetry


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One response to “Dreams

  1. Abigail

    September 5, 2015 at 1:36 am

    Someone added a third stanza…

    Fleeing like the dew when confronted by the scorching sun
    Leaving in me a deep longing, or perhaps spasms of fears
    Letting go of its grip but with fading marks
    A fuzzy memory, misty armpits and misty thighs

    Stay with me…stay with me



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